Grammar on the Shop Page

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Am I Correct?

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  1. kman1459

    kman1459 New Member

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    On the shop page it says:


    • Taxes (despite most other servers of our size do we have it registered and pay taxes)

      Which I believe should be changed to we do.

      Also it states

      Furthermore do we have a crackpack server where no ingame content is given to sponsors.

      Which I think should be changed to Furthermore, we did have a crackpack server... (Thanks Chugga for the correction).

    • EDIT: I have found a lot of errors throughout the website anyone have good ideas for how to show there corrections?
     
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  2. Mouro

    Mouro Well-Known Member

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    Just missing a comma (IMO)
     
  3. chugga_fan

    chugga_fan ME 4M storage cell of knowledge, all the time

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    It's "Furthermore, we did have a crackpack server...", because it's no longer up
     
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  4. mrminesheeps

    mrminesheeps Helper

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    yeah i think somebody needs to spend a couple minutes changing the text up in shop :p
     
  5. Timmypwn

    Timmypwn Well-Known Member

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    the poll now needs to be, does the change need to go through XD. cuz the comments gave an anwer that came closer to the original intention.
     
  6. SirStudMuffin

    SirStudMuffin Well-Known Member

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    Theres alot of things that need revising tbh
     

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